Murder on the OCT Express Visual Novel
Project Overview
The project I'm working on is for an OCT (Original Character Tournament) which has different mediums of artists paired against one another to tell a story with their chosen characters. Please note the names listed below are not their official ones. This is to keep obscurity from my fellow OCT members and keep the cast a surprise. Only the protagonists names are correct.
The medium I'm using is a small visual novel mixed with a few player choice mechanics. I'm making the story set in 4 acts: Prologue, Chapter 1, 2, 3. The scripts however will be sent out of order based upon priority.
The setting is on a multi-dimensional train known as the October Express and is a murder mystery based story.
The protagonist is an officer that was tasked to deliver a prisoner to a far off facility held within it's own unique reality in space time. The train is the only way of travel there with no estimated return date. The officer will meet a variety of other characters ranging between magical creatures, aliens, and eldritch beings alike.. Or other ordinary humans! But things take a dark turn when a sudden murder aboard the October Express is afoot. And it's up to the protagonist and various other guest characters to team up and solve the mystery behind it all!
All the characters listed will be available to casting calls (closed characters are currently in WIP format), but I will be updating them slowly. And expect more characters to come up in the next couple days!
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Latest Updates
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Alright, apologies for keeping it open for so long without an update! I'm extending the deadline for one more week in hopes to fill out the last open role that I do kind of need and I'd rather not have to attempt it myself with the workload I have already. Unfortunately, I also have not finished the current script so it may take a bit longer for the voice actors to receive their scripts when all the characters have been cast. However, this project WILL get finished I can assure you. I've just had a lot on my plate, but this is definitely a project I still want to see through! I have closed Donovan's role for any new auditions, as I think 12 is a fairly good variety and I'll hopefully be casting the va soon. I'll keep the other roles available for now as I've slowly been going through them. Again, thank you all so much for having found interest in my little project and my apologies on it's constant delays. I've listened to every one of your auditions countless times already and you all have brought such a variety of different takes to the characters that's just a wonder to hear! Until the next update, I'll see you then!
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Deadline pushed back a week
Hey guys, second update for the time! I'm really happy to see so many awesome people auditioning for this little project of mine and wanted to thank you all again for your work! Unfortunately there's still a few roles that haven't been auditioned for that I'll need to find voices for so I'm pushing the deadline back a bit. Currently, I've changed it to next week. It's possible I will push until the end of the month, but I can only keep this call open for so long before I need to make the final cast selection. As stated before, I do have other characters from my previous chapters I'll need voices for, but I will probably leave this cast call open past the deadline so that I can update it later with those roles as they aren't as important right now. Thank you all for taking your time and offering me your voices. They've all been incredible and it's going to be incredibly difficult to choose! -
Minor Update: Donovan Audition Line tweaks
First update post! First of all, I'd like to thank everyone who's submitted an audition so far across all roles! You've all done a wonderful job and I wish I had time to comment all of them as they come, but at the moment I’m currently busy with finishing the current script and assets outside of work. I've still got a few more roles to add/edit for open casting so hopefully those will be up soon! Now, the reason for this update. I was talking to a friend of mine who giggled at the fact I used kekeke for his laugh in the audition lines. That’s how I’ve been writing them in my works since I want his laugh to be a bit unique. That said, I’ve now replaced them with simple 'cackle' and 'chuckle' notes. For those who sent in auditions for Donovan, you don’t need to redo your auditions. Your voices were all wonderful! However, if you’d like to do a retake of his laughter, you are free to do so! If you do decide to do a retake, I’d like a few variations of his laugh if possible so long as they maintain a smug or maniacal sound to them. Just send an mp3 file to my email with your casting call username and I’ll be sure to give it a listen! My email: [email protected] Title the Subject: Donovan Laugh [username] I look forward to seeing you all being these characters to life and look forward to working with you once the roles are cast! Best of luck to you guys and hopefully I’ll have another update for you all soon!
Usually fairly serious, tend to over-think situations. The straight man of the lead duo who's constantly overworking himself with long nights and no days off.
(Politely calming down a rowdy passenger) Miss, I would like to ask you to refrain from accusing the trusted staff of this train.
[Suspect is being a bit snarky with their remarks to your questions] (Raising voice slightly) Don't derail this conversation any further. I would like to ask why you were in a car practically on the opposite side of the train where your seat was... But I guess I should first ask... Why were you equipped with a firearm and knife?
(Disregarding) And we don't want to hear it. I'm here to officially place you under arrest for the Murder of Joanne Stone.
Is just a kind elderly woman. Soft spoken and warm, but has her moments of dark eeriness to them as she peers into her customer's glass and gazes upon their futures to see their grim fates... I like to think her laughs is the hearty 'Ohoho' sort, but I've left it open in the script to your own interpretations.
You seem to be in a spot of trouble officer, might I offer you a cup of tea?
My fortunes are never wrong dear. What I have foreseen *will* happen... Regardless of what anyone may try to do to prevent the outcome..
Of course deary! I haven't been in there since this morning to serve the early risers such as yourself, but otherwise the kitchen should just be how I left it! Perish the though anything incriminating was left behind to frame me (laugh)
Her voice is somewhere in the lower pitch, a bit rough and gritty with a tough girl attitude.
Hey, you only live once right! Man I'm tellin' ya. The next opportunity I get, I'm outta here! Find like... I dunno, find some place small and just forget about all this!
Look *officer* you've got your job, I've got mine. I'm not leaving this spot unless this train somehow *miraculously* gets set on fire!
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[Someone runs in claiming the trains on fire]
You gotta be kidding me...
[First time seeing some strange eldritch abomination]
W... What...! What in the world even IS that thing?!
A bit of a bratty, snarky edge to her voice with the same tone as a girl in highschool. Somewhere between Panty from PASWG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qYwXvWDqOaE and Mera from Epithet Erased https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IEADt1B5eBM
Heh, you're just a weird little freak aren’t ya? What you do to get yourself locked up in here hmm?
Yeah well, must've been pretty stupid of you to get caught then.
(mischievous laughter) Oh my god! That’s so fucked up! I love it~
A pitch higher than Ed Baylock https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IsuVZNYbcyU soft spoken and kind. A sweet elderly man with the wisdom to provide the younger generation with some well minded insight.
[You're providing a young man with sage advice that he needs to hear] I know that look in your eyes boy. I've seen them many a time in these last few years... Feeling as though you're trapped in place with no other choice but to follow orders... But let me ask you... When was the last time you did something *you* wanted to do? Hmm? You've still got plenty of time left to find a job that makes you happy! Just.. take a day off to relax and have some fun!
(Charming) Well aren't you a beautiful rose. It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance my dear!
(chuckle) Yes well, old habits die hard it seems! But I think it's best we get going now. Ah, best of luck on your investigation officer!
A woman with a two-faced personality. Normally appears to be fairly shy and quiet, an intellectual who prides herself in her studies… But can let loose an almost chaotic and possibly murderous personality when you least expect it.
Oh, I’m.. so sorry to disturb you officer. I wasn’t sure when would be a good time to see you—
[An item you were desperately looking for is no longer in the place you left it] (Horrified and panicked) Wha— where is it? Where did he— O-oh no..! I… I need to need to find it… quickly!
(Maniacal laughter. Something similar to Harley Quinn or Jinx from league of legends. Feel free to make it as long and crazy as you want. Just have fun with it! Feel free to add-lib dialogue. This role requires a strong duality range in tone.)
A chill and confident woman, her voice is fairly chill, but confident and optimistic. She's brings pep into her step and always looking for a good scoop!
Hey! Nice to meetcha! Mind if I sit here with ya? This train's been getting reeeaally crowded ya'know?
Oooo, sounds to me like we've got a murder on our hands! Heh, good think this train isn't lacking in number of detectives aye? Quite the convenience I say!
Hey, wait a minute... I don't recall seeing this here just a minute ago... Someone must have moved it... but how? There was no one else here!
Young, roughly around 18 years old. A bit of a raspy voice and a scarred face. Has a voice similar to the boy in this video https://youtu.be/a9QYxM3jav0
[You quickly just shoved a corpse into a duffle bag before the woman could notice and your lying right in front of it to deter her attention]
(Nervous) Oh, er-- hi! I was just trying to get rid of this bag of... [Workers pass by the open door and you hesitate a moment] Rotten ketchup! And I uh- could use your help...carrying it and all of that...
[You're rushing into the engine room trying to get the door open before any of the staff see you.]
(A little frustrated) Come onnnn... Chingada madre!
[Having realized you've broken the trust of a friend, you decide to tell her the truth]
(sighs sadly) Piper...This guy was Álvaro Figueroa, a corrupt police detective... He framed me for murder, got me arrested… And boarded this train to finish the job and *kill me*. I *had* to fight back.
A 35 year old cop who uses his wildcard tactics and razor thin focus to do the job his own way. Only trusting in himself to get the job done right. Can be really chill and laid back until the job demands it, but can also be stubborn and reckless in his stances/actions.
Freeze! Put your hands in the air!
[You're being asked if anything has happened at your post since you've been there, but you left someone else to do the job and just came back so you're trying to play it off cool]
Of course not! Nothing's happened since we've been here haha! Honestly it's been pretty boring!
Hey, thanks for havin' my back the other day. I thought you'd be uptight and rat me out to the kid!
An older woman with a low somewhat raspy voice. She is often quite sarcastic and cocky, almost playful and condescending at times, but when caught off guard her voice can shoot up much higher. She has a strong southern accent.
Joan Stone! I am The Siren. My associate here is Viktor, a mortician gifted with the ability to see spirits. Currently I'm being suspected for your murder.
Awwhhhh. Gonna cry, Prince? You really will do anything people ask of you, huh? Like a puppy dog. I dunno why you’re looking at me like that. It’s admirable that you’re so… Uh… Willing to please. But really, you look just as weak as your psyche. Even Viktor is bulkier than you, and that man looks like he’s one sour patch kid away from dissolving.
(Uproarious laughter) "Oh my GOD! Me? Me? You think I’m gonna be a narc of all people? Honey, sweetie, darling, you don’t think I’ve committed a few felonies of my own? If I ratted you out, I’d be sending myself right to prison with you! Don’t be silly, kid.”
Voice sounds similar to Shinra from Fire Force: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QAT858EiSo4https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QAT858EiSo4 A fairly calm and often very casual man who knows when it’s time to be serious.
A pleasure to meet you Officer Prince. I just heard the announcement on the speakers... Did... did someone really...?
Hey, take it easy you two. No need to fight now. I'm sure we can get this aaaall sorted out if we just talk like civilized people.
[Shocked] H-hey wait.. I-I.. didn't sign up for anything like this!
Has a fairly gruff, authoritative voice.
Marc, you need to take your job seriously. No one is going to show you any respect unless you MAN UP and take a stand for yourself. With force if necessary.
I'm sorry. But Officer Prince is currently indisposed at the moment. If you need to inform him of anything revolving the case, you can redirect your findings to Detective Sonya.
You're going to have to do a lot more to convince me, son. This is pathetic, even for your standards... But I suppose that's fair given your track record...
Young, around 17 years old. He’s fairly shy and untrusting of most people.
[Caught in the staff only kitchen.] (Nervous) Oh, I was… just looking around. I saw someone leaving from here, but they didn’t look like a staff member… So I figured…
[You feel intimidated by someone much larger than you] You know what? Ah… M-maybe I should just leave *you* to do all the.. Investigating officer. Heh, I’ll just… I’ll just be over here…
[You're trying to speak up to an officer but trying to do so politely without angering him] Uh.. Officer Prince, sir? You seem… Awfully fixated on this man, but… with the uh… you know… the evidence you have here… I-I don't think this is the guy we're looking for…
Donovan is a murderer and a cannibal. An entity of unknown origin that has the abilities of shadow manipulation, levitation and has the help of a shadowy 'friend' in the form of four extra arms. He tends to keep his voice calm and smooth with a bit of smug energy. And is somewhere in the lower voice range. Despite their off-putting appearance, they sound polite and hardly raises his voice. Yet can sound eerily dark when he wants to be.
Also since I'm limited to three voice lines. If you’d like to provide various takes of his laugh please add those to the end!
My, MY officer Prince. You're simply *brimming* with confidence today~ What's the good news hmm? Did the big man upstairs finally give you a new murder case to solve? Or have you finally decided to throw in the towel?
(Devious and intimidating) My sight has never been wrong dear boy. Whatever becomes untrue is just a staggered moment in time that expands into it's own reality of existence. The time will come when you've finally hit your crossroads... and when that day arrives... (Dark chuckle) I'm going to savor every moment of it~
(cackling) You certainly are a curious one Officer Prince~ But if my hunch is correct.. and this isn't just some random 'check up'... Then I'm certain you'll be back here soon enough~!
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