Mina's lines should be delivered a little more reserved, and line "2" should be the complete opposite of those first two. She finally steps into her strength. However, nailing how I intend the delivery will of course be worked on with all cast members... just some constructive criticism! Again, though, I love your sound. You have great emotional delivery and voice. Thank you so much!
Thanks for the feedback! I'm new to doing accents and I think it maker it a bit harder for me to emote, so the more feedback, the better!