The Ultimate Showdown

My project is an animatic reimagining of the climax of the 2007 game Super Paper Mario. The climax will start with the lead-up to the final boss and the first act fight. There will be scenes in-between the main boss detailing what is going on inside the final boss and in Dimension D before the second act and conclusion:

https://mysinfulhand.tumblr.com/post/787295620163616768/master-posts
https://mysinfulhand.tumblr.com/post/826608032353026048/scene-6-due-l-part-1-at-the-encouragement-of-my

So far, I have storyboarded 6 out of 10 scenes. The total length of all ten scenes is TBD, but the current one, Scene 6, will run at about 20 minutes.
However, I need an editor with a writing background with an extensive knowledge of Mario and the game in question. They will be looking over the storyboard and animatics and notify me of any writing errors, plotholes, or ways that could enhance the scenes in addition to helping with story flow.

18+
Must use Discord regularly.