I REALLY like the performance here and a lot of the general sound of your voice, but the quality has a bit of reverb issue- is there any way you could clean it up? My other issue with sound quality is that when you get louder I SUSPECT you're further away from your mic- if that's not the case; what you're doing makes it seem like you are. If that IS the case: I'd recommend turning the gain down and maintaining your usual distance from the mic as it makes a world of difference in how the quality sounds.
Funny you should say that; I'm getting some more soundproofing later this week to help with the reverb issue in my room. As for turning down the gain, I agree that I didn't have it turned down low enough, especially for the final line. If you want, I can re-submit the audition after the aforementioned issues are taken care of.
That's fine, of course, but feel free to leave this particular audition up in the meantime!
Safe to say that I wont be going to court now haha Good Luck