Hmm I find your mic quality to be very distorted, it pops too every now and then. Your soundbites are also too similar, in the sense that you're basically sighing out loud (or gasping for breath), instead of doing the various sounds such as in the example video.
Alright, I'll try re-submitting.
Voice Actor
Kaleb is James' younger brother (26 years old). He is analytic and logical, very mild-mannered. But when angered, oh boy he's angry. Usually though, he's very calm and collected, being able to think before he acts, surveying the best possible solution.
He is blind in one eye.
Please mimic most of these sounds (feel free to improvise): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M5y0VzTr4JU
"Would you get your head out of the clouds? We have to be focused, we can't let feelings get in the way."
"Argh! I will find you, and I'll make sure you will rue the day you were born!"
