First off, giant kudos for being able to keep the same tone throughout the audition! I know Monokuma is pretty difficult to manage for some but you definitely have the tone down right. As for your individual takes, the first was great, the second take I feel could have been a bit more annoyed in it and I feel the last line could have been done with a bit more enthusiasm as he's explaining the rules of the killing game to the students and, as we all know, he loves his killing game. Feel free to re-audition if you'd like! I hope this helps!