What kind of mic do you use to record?
stadium USB studio mic why do you ask?
It sounds like there was some background noise and you tried to remove it through audacity or whatever program you use to edit your audio, I recommend trying removing the noise manually first and then if there's any noise left then edit it out because if there is enough background noise, then when you edit it out a weird effect gets put on the voice. So that's my advice. Other than that I thought you audition was really good!
ok i will re-audition when i have time also i didn't use any program to block out sound I'm not sure what that was but consider it gone