Co-writer

I need someone to help me flesh out the story of the short film that best executes the idea of my story when it comes the world and the two characters. We need to come up with a polished structured story that stays in the limits of a 5- minute short film while still delivering something compelling and pushes the message of the film: A better world can't exist within your head, you need to put your ideas into the real world, as you'll find yourself stuck u your own fantasy and loose connection with the world while falling into insanity.