You've done a remarkable job as far as attitude, I feel like i can actually see you seething in anger. Id like to hear a slight variation if I may, see how your voice works with a little more 'passion' in the second line if you will. Right now, you're at a boil, and I'd like to see how you sound when you fully lose your temper. Think along the lines of finally having lost it, and build up to that explosion in your second line, as if you at first were simply aggravated, but now you no longer have any boundaries against attacking the person you're addressing.If you're interested, id also like to see you submit an audition for D-77163, I feel the current gravel in your voice would pair nicely with his lines.