I love your voice, and you clearly put in the effort here! I will say, Makima has a sort of intimidating way of talking. Not that she's emotionless, but you can tell she's hiding something malicious when she speaks. For example, for the "I'm quite fond of the country mouse too." line, she says it very ominously, like you could tell something was about to happen. It's near the end of the reference video I provided if you want to check that out again.

But seriously, keep it up! This is some really good work!