Hello, Jarod!
I greatly appreciate the takes you submitted!
Unfortunately, I don't think it fits him that much. I dunno, maybe it's just the pacing or the audio being slightly quiet even at full volume, but it's too soft for me.
Nevertheless though, I greatly appreciate you for submitting anyways, and if there are other roles you'd be willing to try, I'd love to have you participate!
Thank you for your submission!