Hey mate it's not bad, the cheerful easy-going but hot blooded energy is there, but he sounds a little too old for a 14 year old, I was hoping you could make him sound like a young lad who personality wise has some maturity but has that childish impulsiveness about him occasionally
Yeah I can absolutely try that! Thanks I'll try to record something soon as I can if you want me too!
Of course, you're free to resubmit and or try for others