Gosh, I really love the first bit. The way the laugh leads into the voice is very smooth and I can really picture Longtail taunting Rusty with this line, mixed in with hints of stress like clenched teeth. You're great at conveying emotion, even without a picture helping to play the narrative. If you dont get Longtail, I'd really suggest you tryout for one of Tigerclaw's or Brokenstar's supporters, like Clawface and Darkstripe. I can even see you doing Scourage if you can do aggressive but cold-sounding lines.
Thank you :D
YOOOOOOOO .German Longtail.IM IN LOVE
Oh mymymy, I love your accent! It's a very interesting take on his character, I wouldnt mind having this :D