I really love your audition! I feel your accent really matches the character too! I just wanted to address your audio, as it seems to pop in a sense. There's no background noise, which means you're recording in an ideal environment. You may be recording a bit too close to your mic, or your mic might have a bit too much gain. You could try recording a bit further from the mic or adusting the gain on it (if your mic has the option to) or use a pop filter(if you aren't already using one) The fact that the waves on your audition are large and "bulky" do mean that you are being loud and clear when your speak in your audition, which is a very good practice if I may add (Something I'm still struggling with as a beginner voice actor). All in all, I love your audition, and just wanted to give some advice on how to fix your audio a bit.
Oh wow thanks a lot! I was indeed very close to the mic and increasing the distance should totally fix it. Thanks again for putting time into a feedback, it really helped!
No problem! Keep up the good work!