I feel you're too soft-spoken in this audition, Tom's quite loud and garish, and you don't seem to be illustrating that in your voice - seems more like a laid-back and sarcastic person than one who'd be cracking jokes every other minute. For the panicked and angry line you also don't seem to be very angry or agitated. I'd be happy to hear another audition from you using this feedback, though! Thank you for the audition nonetheless!
Once I am done with work I will submit a new audition with your feedback included. Thank you for letting me know!