CALLISTO: A Sci-Fi Psychological Horror Radio Play
Zabese for Tom Stone
THE COMMS OFFICER
Tom Stone is a rather brash and arrogant joker, who often makes any matter into a laughing one. Still dependable in his work, Stone values his position more than anything and yearns for a future promotion from his employers. He despises Holmes, who he thinks is a waste of space on the mission, and the only crew member to put him in his place is Gibson. Once the signal is discovered, Stone becomes increasingly unhinged, and begins to make dangerous inclinations toward his crewmates.
Voice attributes: 20-40 age range, North American accent, with a medium to high pitched voice.
Nada, boss. We can correspond with the other bases on Jupiter’s moons - Ganymede being the one closest to us, takes a few minutes for our messages to reach them. Though why GAN-BASE would want to listen about our shit is beyond me.
Receiving signal via CARL... Gotcha. Good picture, listening to you loud and clear. How's the weather out there, boss? Sunny with a chance of rain? (Laughs)
What? No. No no no! They can't be down! I checked them this morning, they were running perfectly! Jesus fucking Christ! Bastard! Something's blown out the array, I can't get anything out or in!
I feel you're too soft-spoken in this audition, Tom's quite loud and garish, and you don't seem to be illustrating that in your voice - seems more like a laid-back and sarcastic person than one who'd be cracking jokes every other minute. For the panicked and angry line you also don't seem to be very angry or agitated. I'd be happy to hear another audition from you using this feedback, though! Thank you for the audition nonetheless!
Once I am done with work I will submit a new audition with your feedback included. Thank you for letting me know!