Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney − Justice for All (fan dub)
Maiden Melody for April May
Redd White's secretary and forced accomplice to his many misdeeds.
April May mostly speaks in a high pitched, upbeat, and bubbly way (valley girl maybe?). She's not above using her physical assets to woo people and only breaks her facade when severely angered at which point she explodes into vicious verbal assaults.
Feel free to pick a single line from the first box- you aren't required to do all three of the lines in it.
"You're the lawyer, aren't you? The detective told me... He said, "Don't say nothing to that lawyer, pal!" Tee hee!"
"April May! At your service!" *wink*
(There is a mild commotion in the gallery)
Judge: "Order! An introduction should not require any reaction from the crowd! The witness will refrain from wonton * winking!"
"Aww... Yes, Your Honor."Wright: "Miss May. What you said just now was quite... revealing."
"Revealing? Oooh, you'd like that, wouldn't you? Naughty Mr. Lawyer..."Wright "Oh? Excuses not on sale today?"
(At a loss for words and struggling to find them) "Oooh? Oh ho ho. (Getting angrier and angrier) Mmmrrrrph! Ooooorrrrrrr ggggghhhhhhh... hhh!!! (Exploding and YELLING angrily) What's it to you, porcupine-head!? That stupid clock doesn't matter, okay!? She did it! And she should die for it! Die!"
Judge: "W-w-whoa! Let's not get ahead of ourselves. T-this is a court of law, and the witness will remain calm!"
(Realizes she's blowing her facade and desperately starts fighting to subdue her anger) "Hrrrgh... hrrrh... Hrrr... heh. Oh? Oh! Oh? Oh hoh ho! (Trying to play it off) S-silly me! *grunt* Did I, um, like... lose it? I guess I did. Tee hee!" *wink*(Wright attempts to present evidence to her- her response is low key and calm and maybe even a bit playfully mocking despite being incredibly direct and harsh)
"Hey guess what? Actually, I really hate your guts. So get lost because, well I'm not co-operating."
Oh wow, that transformation going both ways was something else.
April May's transformation is so hilariously crazy to me and I hope I could showcase that! Thanks for listening!
Nail on head.
Oh thanks so much, that means a lot! I tried a more valley girl approach on this but I didn't know if I should go even higher with the voice. If you have feedback feel free otherwise I'll just leave it as is. Thanks for everything!
I'd say the delivery method on the second take of "April May at your service" is more the proper approach and you got it pretty well down pat.