For just starting out I can hear the potential you have. If I were to say one thing to work on it's mic clipping/peaking. It's when you're doing a line that required yelling and the recording waveform hits the top. It distorts it and makes it come in way too hot and loud. If you're using Audacity you can fix it by turning down your mic volume when yelling. It's something I think every VA has done at some point so no need to worry about it. But that's all from me, just wanted to give ya the heads up