He should sound a bit shaky and a little cowardly for the first two lines. He could stutter at I'm..I'm sorry. I liked how you focused on the word midst, the tone you have found for the character, and the rage of the third line!
Thanks for the tip. That would definitely be able to do that as an easy fix. Glad you enjoyed my audition.
Hey Logan, been wondering about the role. Is there a way you can make him English? The Manuverian Empire is supposed to be shown as the stereotypical British bad guys.
Of course :)