Hmm it started to sound very muffled when you tried to do the growl/yell. Your voice does need to sound clear in the audio.
Thank you for the feedback! the original yell was clipping so I redid it here. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ISZn5W891nlE7gSPZfTo94dwi8Y02Asz/view?usp=sharing