Pitch matches the character well, and you manage to give him that studied demeanor in the audition which works in favor with your emoting. The delivery is strange because I feel you could draw out a bit more of the line, especially in the second lines, but its evenly enough paced that I don't mind that too much. Emotional peaks are well done, but keep in mind how quickly you're ending some of your dialogue. Tone is good, because you're going for a more traditional take on the learned scholar for the Occultist and running with it to the letter. There's not too much wrong with this audition, just mind how quickly your lines end and there shouldn't be much of an issue with it in the future.
Thank you for the tips and suggestions! I was starting to notice the short ends after a few listens. That's something I can work on and keep in mind for the future. Thanks again!
