The volume on your audition, even on a max setting, made it difficult for me to rate this but here's what I can critique. Pitch needs to be a bit lower for your voice to really match the character, however your do have that learned demeanor for the character. Delivery is well enough paced, slowing down when neccesary like the final lines, and you manage to sell me on the emotional peaks of your audition. Your tone is a mixed bag because you do have the calm expression down, but come off as passive at times because of the more subdued delivery at portions. Your first attempts for this audition are the best, and I think you handle the demonic voice well enough; though please try to increase input if you want to retry this one.