Pitch is almost there, you need to lower your voice a little bit more and adopt the persona of a learned scholar to make this one work best. Delivery is well enough paced, however I am noticing that your emotional peaks continue to have an issue with the mic blowing out; this is something I should have mentioned earlier and forgive me for not saying so earlier. Tone is fairly well done, going for a more unfazed emotional basis here which is fairly consistent throughout your audition. Besides the issue with the pitch and delivery, I feel like your second line could use some more horror behind your voice, Overall not bad, but it's held back by small bits that unfortunately add up against you.