WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
Holden for The Bounty Hunter
"The thrill of the hunt... The promise of payment."
An executioner as much as a hunter, the Bounty Hunter is a man on the darkest part of justice and retribution. Only coin sways this man to aid the hamlet and brave the dungeons, as morality is as foreign to him as mercy.
The Bounty Hunter is a man of few words and fewer scruples for his job and those that are marked as his targets. He carries himself with a stoic, almost cold attitude; giving way to a pragmatic, distrustful individual.
Voice: Medium Low - Low; Stoic - Near Emotionless - Ruthless
Landing a Critical Hit - Controlled Fury
I know just where you are weakest!Called your bluff, friend.Becoming Abusive - Venomous Spite
You tenderfoot fools!Anger me and you roll the dice.Becoming Focused - Merciless Wit
I live for this.Everything bleeds. You watch.
Pitch needs to be much lower as your current voice doesn't match the character's age or cold demeanor. Delivery is well enough paced, and the emotional peaks are done well enough but I the pitch seriously hurts how convincing they sound. Tone needs to be much more dark and merciless, as it seems you have the idea for this but lack the intensity to give it all the more impact. The pitch remains as the biggest issue with this audition as it doesn't fit the character and lowers the credibility of other aspects of your audition. Lower it and increase your intensity if you wish to try it again.