Holden
auditioning for
The Abomination
in WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
Pitch could be a little lower, you certainly have the raspy voice for it but don't force the voice if it becomes an issue for you. Delivery is fine enough, the pacing is even and you do get most of the emotional peaks down; though you could use a bit more power in your final lines. Tone is there but you need a bit more emotional backing to sell these lines to me. I can see you understand what the appropriate tone is, but you need a bit more power behind your lines before I call this great.
Very detailed, thanks! I'll definitely take them under advisement.
