WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
Hades for The Abomination
"Tortured and reclusive... this man is more dangerous than he seems."
A man beaten, and scarred by the cruelty of scientific pursuit, the Abomination holds a gnawing secret within his body. Now, he carries that horrible burden to the hamlet, where he seeks to find sanctity for his mind and body.
Having been the subject of inhumane experiments and horrifying torture, the abomination carries himself in a melancholic, somber mood that evokes either pity or self-deprecation. That is, until the beast comes out.
Voice: Medium - Medium Low; Wary - Insecure - Doubtful
Landing a Critical Hit - Bellowing Fury
I have clawed back my freedom from worse than you!
My curse feeds my rage!Becoming Hopeless - Depressed Terror
This burden dims my very soul.It feeds off of my essence, even now I falter...Becoming Stalwart - Unshaking Resolve
I can master it! We can master our fate!As long as I am free, I will fight!
Pitch is spot on here, you have the character's age in your voice and the roughness of their damaged psyche. Delivery is interesting as your first attempts throughout have an even pacing with some fair emoting but the second attempts have a more disparate pacing with heavier emotional input; I personally prefer the latter. Tone is also interesting, as you're playing off the character as a bit more desperate while managing to add the rage and somber nature throughout the line readings. Only complaint here is that both of your attempts at the second line could use a more somber or depression emotional backing; just intensify what you're already doing there.