Your pitch fits the character well enough, and there is a natural maturity in your voice that is appropriate for the character. Delivery has me at odds, because the more drawn out pacing on your lines would work for the tone you're taking for the character but it is inappropriate for the more fast and intense nature of Darkest Dungeon; as I feel that your emotional input is lacking here, not really rising to meet those emotional peaks. This subdued and calmed tone you have for the character is both a strength and a weakness, because although done well it hurts your delivery because of how drawn out the readings can sound. While it is a different take on the character, it misses the mark on how succinct the lines need to read out.