I normally wouldn't go for a more guttural voice for this character, but given the pitch you're taking, it actually sounds quite natural. Emotional input here is well delivered throughout, and your pacing is well balanced here, only faltering to being too quick in the last line to sound natural. I like the more wounded and almost grief stricken tone you have here, as it works well with the more guttural and almost croaking voice you've chosen. Not many things to really complain about besides that final line reading that could be evened out, well done.
Thanks a lot! I saw you giving out feedback to other auditions for these characters and I was a little nervous about this coming hahaha! But yeah I agree, one of my biggest issues in general is pacing my line delivery. Thanks for the feedback!
