This is a significant improvement from your initial audition, taking every part of what made your initial attempt good and improving on it. The emotional input is excellent here, exuding animalistic rage and a bloodthirsty tone throughout your audition. The second line in particular is well executed, as it sounds more on guard than before, adding to the paranoia. You also didn't have to do it, but I certainly enjoyed the celtic accent you gave it in the second attempt; in fact I think this is my preferred accent for her. Not much else to say but, it is a significant improvement that I firmly enjoyed listening to. Sorry for how late this one is, I'll get around to any others that you have going this week.
Again, thank you so much! I really find myself looking forward to reading your critiques. Hellion is a gas, I admit.... murder on the throat, but a gas all the same. I've kept the re-auditions to just this gal for the moment, but if you'd like a re-take on any of the others, please just let me know.
