Pitch matches this character well in maturity, which compliments the calm and collected tone you have for this audition. This is an almost perfect delivery, as it has a natural pace for your speech as well as emotional grounding for the louder portions. Tone is both learned and insidious as you manage to add a bit of each portion to each of your lines, while keeping to their central emotion. The only real complaint I have is that your first lines need to have a bit more power behind them, but overall this is a solid audition.
Thank you! You have given me such good feedback for all of my auditions, and I can't thank you enough for that. It's comments like yours that help me grow. Thank you!