Pitch is well executed here as it actually makes your tone sound learned while not going overboard with making it sound older. This is your best paced and best realized delivery you have, as it hits the sweet spots for all of the emotional peaks while drawing out your lines just enough to give me an impactful performance. Your tone is interesting as it manages to sound like a wise sage throughout, and maintain that mindset in all of your lines; I especially like the emotional back for the second lines as they sound all that much more desperate. Also, you legitimately made my skin crawl with your Elder Speak, and it gives just that much more thematic weight to your audition.
Thank you so much for all the feedback! I feel like The Occultist and The Highwayman are my best auditions, but you've definitely helped me see some areas I can improve on!
