Pitch is spot on here, the gruff nature of your voice and matured youthful presence works perfectly with your tone. Delivery is equally well executed through your balanced emoting for the first and final lines; your second attempts are the best of these. Tone is, for a lack of a better word, appropriately roguish, sacrificing none of that smooth delivery for the gruff tone you've got here. There are times that your voice almost mirrors Chris Sabat's Vegeta with how gruff it comes off; perfect for an anti-hero like this one.
Thank you for the feeback! It's funny you mention Chris Sabat's Vegeta as I actually drew some inspiration from him for this audition.
Congratulations! Your voice was awesome!