Pitch would be too high under normal circumstances, however the desperate and almost maddened tone you've taken with this audition actually works in tandem with this. The abomination is a character that's haunted by a prison in his own flesh and you've managed to bring this to light with a faithful yet different take on the character. Normally, I would stick close to writing with an audition, however this is actually refreshing in terms of how you've conveyed the delivery, which is well paced and presented, and the tone with how agonized and terrified you've made the character sound. Well done, this was a welcome surprise and sorry that I can't offer up other criticism.