Pitch is good here, as it helps keep the delivery as sounding grounded with your somewhat serious tone. On the delivery itself, I do like that it retains this very even pace throughout but I feel that your emotional input is a little restrained here. I understand the intent behind your tone, as I can see you emulating the Joker a bit with this as being both composed and subtly insane. However, this can play against the audition if you offer too much restraint behind the lines; there's not much subtlety behind the Jester as everything, even death and murder are jokes to him.
Thank you for the input on my audition I was trying to pull some essence from the joker but also from a jester character from A game League Of Legends but still need to work on that. The restraint and all around voice work is something I am definitely working on improving for future as I’m still new to doing voice acting. Thank you for the input again Jack Lincoln
