Pitch is unfortunately too low on this one, which may work against your tone as it may make the character sound a little too cocky for the slightly lower tone. That being said, your delivery is very well done here as your emoting is well founded within the lines you've given and there's no real issue with the actual voice besides the pitch. Tone is appropriate for the character, as you do get the fear and youthful pride down for her abilities. If your pitch was a bit higher, this would come off flawlessly as it reflects on the character's age.
Thank you! I'll let this one go for now, as I really struggle getting my voice to do much of anything in higher pitches, but if you'd like me to put in another audition and attempt something higher, just let me know.
I think this sounds great. It's pretty much how I imagined her to sound.
Thank you!
