Yes, significant improvement in your pacing for delivery. This is a good balance for speed in your lines. The second one specially sounds menacing with how you drew out the dialogue on the last bit. Only real complaint is that you're not as impassioned as you could be with your final set of lines but this is pretty well done as is. I'll count this as your final attempt.
Yeah, should have taken a longer break before recording that last one so my voice wouldn't have been tired by that point. Still I want to understand this better so in future auditions I'll understand the character better. Just One question, would you consider her as Lawful good, Neutral good, Lawful neutral, neutral, or Lawful evil?
Well, I would say this one is more of a neutral character that's veering towards evil as a result of her desire for wealth, knowledge and power. A lot of this comes from her backstory, so make of that what you will.
