The Loot Ninja
auditioning for
The Abomination
in WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
Pitch is almost there, the raspy voice certainly works but I hope you're not straining yourself for a lower pitch. Delivery has a good pace, but your emoting doesn't vary enough with each line. Tone works well enough for the character, as it does have that grumbling, depressed feeling in it. However, it's not very dynamic as it feels like it's emoting the same tone throughout the lines instead of showing the different portions of the character's mind.
Would it be preferable to submit attempt 2 as a reply or a separate audition?
