Well done in capturing his irritation and confusion here! A couple of notes: this track is completely panned to my left ear. Make sure you export to a mono track and don't use stereo, because it will displace your audio. My only other note is to channel a bit more of his stubbornness. He's not a laid-back character; I like your short-tempered line deliveries after "I can hear you"; I just wanted it on that line specifically. Still, a great audition!