Nice energy here for Saki! Way to bring out that monotone, quiet demeanor she has! One note: the track is a bit harsh on the sibilance and is boxy. This could be due to processing, equipment, or the recording environment. The recording environment is most important. I recommend a smaller room, like a closet, where you can line the walls with sound-dampening tiles or blankets to deaden the sound that could jump back into the microphone! Equipment is a different story, and unfortunately one I can't diagnose from here. If it's processing, I recommend turning off those tools and identifying the culprit. Still a nice audition!