Way to go at capturing Kyo's irritated, sarcastic energy! My only note is to keep that last line a bit more unrestrained! He's mad and upset that they're bothering him! He doesn't enjoy it, and while he is stubborn and restrained at first, he lets loose at the end! Good job!
Omg thank you!! I'll give the last line another try!! Thank you again for the constructive criticism!!
Unfortunately, I am not accepting retakes because of the project's scale, if that's what you mean. I hope you understand. It was still a nice audition!
Oh ok np! i still very much appreciated the kind words and tip, it was a lot of fun auditioning!
Thanks for understanding! And of course, glad to hear you had fun! Thanks for your interest!
