Really nice job conveying Saki's mysterious, quiet energy! My only note is that quite a bit of background noise is crowding the track. I recommend finding an isolated or small room, like a closet for your recording environment. This will let you line the walls with blankets or sound-dampening tiles to reduce incoming noise and boxiness! I also recommend identifying the cause of that background noise and, if possible, turning it off while you record so it doesn't become overwhelming. Nice audition!
Oh I actually did this in my recording booth! I think the oscillating sound I just forgot to edit out was from my computer. Thank you!
Ah, gotcha, no worries, happens to us all! And of course, you did wonderfully! Thank you so much for your interest!
