also edit anything like gain or the clip ill work with ya
No worries about the setup or equipment; anyone, anywhere, in any field can improve! You did a nice job here capturing Kyo's "wise-guy" attitude and his annoyance with Uotani's teasing! Only two notes: the pacing on your second-line delivery is a tad slow; I suggest speeding it up a tad to match the rhythm of the reference scene. The only other note is to bring out a bit more of his temper; he gets angry easily, and Uotani pushes his buttons like clockwork, lol! I love your enthusiasm for the project, but for this many submissions, I am not accepting retakes; I hope you understand. Still a nice job!
Ahh thank you so much for at least letting me down with grace and a compliment lolol but i for sure i was hoping, if you'd chosen me and with a couple takes i could get it spot on but i totally get it, give other a fair shake, especially those who can hit it on the first try haha. i honestly would do this for free my girlfriend is a huuuge fan of Fruits Basket and her fav is Kyo so i thought it'd be so funny and cool to show her haha. anyway good luck on the casting and hopefully it come out exactly as you're seeing it in your head!
Thank you for the kind words and interest in the project; it means a lot to me. I will definitely have future projects, so there are still plenty of voices that you can audition for! I plan to open up my future Fruits Basket Season 3 casting call to a much wider variety, so don't give up just yet! You still did really well!