Nice job capturing Uotani's energy and love for teasing Kyo in this performance! I noticed you increased your output volume, which helps a ton! There's much less static, which lets your performance shine through more. At the very start of the "Here Boy," there is a hum that's a bit harsh. Again, not the end of the world, just something I'd try to troubleshoot and fix. Also, on the fourth delivery of "come on," it sounds slightly cut off, so either it was accidentally cut off in editing, maybe mispronounced, or the processing is a bit too harsh. I'd just try to investigate those things. Again, the recording environment makes a huge difference in your background noise if that is the case! Still a wonderful job here!
Thank you for the feedback! I am very much a beginner and this is a good learning opportunity for me. I will implement these corrections right away
Yeah of course, glad I can give some advice. You still did amazing!