Really nice job capturing Saki's deadpan, monotone delivery in this performance! The only note is that there is this "static" noise as you speak. I can't be certain what it is, but since I don't hear much background noise outside of your speaking, I assume it's noise suppression, a noise gate, or some kind of limiter. If so, prioritize your recording space over processing. I would try to diagnose it to understand where or why it's happening. Processing is great, but it should add to and brighten your voice, not crowd it and overpower it. I also notice your output volume is quite low. Again, I would try to play around and bring it up a bit. If it's picking up more noise, that's a sign you should try to focus on adding sound-dampening to your recording environment, or line the walls with blankets. Still a great job here!