Always appreciate the extra lines; you captured Kyo's confusion and sarcasm really well! A couple of notes: there is quite a bit of background noise that comes from the track as you speak. I don't hear background noise other than when you're talking. So I recommend prioritizing your recording space over processing. Aim to get your natural room volume to a point where, if you do use processing, it's minimal and doesn't sound over-processed. Tools like limiters and noise gates are great, but use them in moderation. If you are using any sort of noise suppression, I would recommend switching to something else, since it can crowd the track and your voice and can almost hurt more than it helps. One other note: amp up a bit of that rageful energy Kyo has! Yes, he's mad, but not restrained; he lets it out! Still a nice audition here!
Would I be able to Re-submit, chief? I got time if you do :)
I appreciate the time and effort, but unfortunately, due to the scale of the project, I am not allowing retakes. I hope you understand. You still did great!
Ahhhh, that's all good. I appreciate the opportunity!