First off, I want you to know you currently have 2 auditions submitted for Uotani that look to be the same. I am not allowing retakes or second auditions because of the potential scale of this project, so please keep that in mind. You are free to audition for Hanajima, but not twice for the same character. You did a nice job channeling Uotani's enjoyment of teasing Kyo! The only issue is a couple of plosives. Not the end of the world! I recommend a pop filter to soften those harsher sounds; they're cheap and can really help reduce them. Also, a nice little trick to get a good speaking voice is to hold your thumb and pinky like you're a surfer saying "wassah dude?!", and place it between your mouth and the microphone. That, paired with the pop filter, can greatly reduce those sounds, or even get rid of them! Good audition!
Thanks very much for the feedback! my mouse is currently semi-broken, which lead to the two submissions for the same character. It's the exact same audio. I can delete the extra so it's out of the way. Again, thanks for the feedback. I do have a pop-filter but I've recently been trying a new technique with editing my recordings so I will need to add it. Cheers!
Ah, absolutely no worries, just wanted you to be aware! And of course, I'm glad to give feedback! I completely understand that trying newer techniques sometimes takes a while to adjust to, for sure! Still, a wonderful job!
Of course, actually for a few more of my auditions I've done I've limited the harder sounds so they aren't so obvious! I've misplaces my pop socket (LMAO) so I will have to order them. Regardless, thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it!
Aw, dang, that stinks! But that's awesome to hear!