First off, great job capturing Saki's monotone, deadpan comedic delivery! A couple of notes: there is quite a bit of background noise in this track. Not the end of the world, but you don't want it to crowd out your voice. An important part is making sure you have a good recording space. Somewhere almost isolated; closets are great! But putting blankets over the walls, or even using sound-dampening tiles, can greatly reduce exterior noise and sound bouncing and echoing back into the mic! Recording space over processing! I'd recommend playing with your input/output volume a bit! It's just a tad high. Also, mouth spacing matters; a good practice is to hold your thumb and pinky between your microphone and mouth. It'll give you a good speaking voice! Still an awesome job!
Thank you. And the feedback is awesome. I'm currently recording from my bedroom because I'm on bed. Rest from a foot surgery. I do have a quieter area that I usually do. My voice recordings in, I can try and move there. If you would like me to audition again?
I appreciate the time and effort! Take your time and rest! And of course! This process lets me give feedback and sharpen my ear to become a better director! Unfortunately, I am not taking retakes for this project to keep my responsibilities more manageable. Still, a nice audition!