Fun delivery here! Really highlights his short temper! One note: your mic peaks are very loud. A couple of ways to fix this: jump into your audio software and adjust the input and output volume, and compression can make a huge difference. YouTube has some great tutorials for you to get an understanding of using those tools and develop an ear; it'll put you above the rest, trust me! When you yell or raise your voice, make sure you're farther away than you are when speaking normally. For regular talking, keep your microphone about the width of your pinky and thumb from your mouth. Still, nice job!