James O’Sullivan
auditioning for
The Maker (Reed Richards 1610)
in Secret Wars (2015) Motion Comic - Issue #1
Love the second take and also just your tambre in general. I think making more of a distinct choice between "commanding evil" vs "snide evil" could make a more powerful read.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I tried to do both, but it’s better to lean into one than the other. I’m gonna tweak my auditon and probably make a second attempt later. Really appreciate the feedback!