Ooh I love the accent! I hadn't really envisioned him with a southern accent (I think that's what that is, apologies if not) but it really works! My only note is just a personal gripe, but try to do the last line with a bit more frantic. But I really like this one!
Thanks :) It is a southern accent, tried to give him almost a snake oil salesman type of charisma. Thanks for the feedback
I could upload a 2nd take with the third line changed if you wanted, not sure if that's what you were suggesting
That would be great, yes!