This is a solid first audition! Additionally, I had a bit of feedback. 1. Try to avoid including bloopers in your submissions. They were funny BUT, itβs harder to imagine a character that way. 2. Instead of having your audition filled with bloopers, have it filled with multiple takes of you experimenting with the lines. How itβs delivered, different pronunciations, etc! For an example, βbarsβ. Instead of dragging it on like βbaarrssβ like you did the whole time, you can do that for one take and then the next can just be βbars.β Make sense? Try it out!